What is the high point in the action,
the climax, the turning point in the action?
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At the climax of the story the outcome
of the conflict is decided; who (or what) will win the struggle is determined. You
are usually emotionally involved in what is happening, and your suspense is greatest
at this point. The conflict, the suspense, the scenes and incidents have been
building to the climax point.
Example
:
He glanced toward her bedside
table. Her phone was there—she probably took messages now and then—but he
didn’t see either a pen or pad. He opened the drawer, rifled through it, and
found a ballpoint near the front. Looking for some paper, he continued
shuffling—through magazines, a couple of paperback books, some empty jewelry
boxes—when something familiar caught his eye.
A sailing ship.
It was on a piece of paper, wedged
between a slim Day-Timer and an old copy of Ladies’ Home Journal. He reached
for it, assuming it was one of the letters he’d written to her over the last couple
of months, then suddenly froze.
How could that be?
The stationery had been a gift from
Catherine, and he used it only when he wrote to her. His letters to Theresa had
been written on different paper, something he’d picked up at the store. He
found himself holding his breath. He quickly made room in the drawer, removing
the magazine and gently lifted out, not one, but five—five!—pieces of the
stationery. Still confused, he blinked hard before glancing at the first page,
and there, in his scrawl, were the words:
My Dearest Catherine . . .
Oh, my God. He turned to the second
page, a photocopy.
My Darling Catherine . . .
The next letter.
Dear Catherine . . .
“What is this,” he muttered, unable
to believe what he was seeing. “It can’t be—” He looked over the pages again
just to make sure.
But it was true. One was real, two
were copies, but they were his letters, the letters he had written to
Catherine. The letters he had written after his dreams, the letters he dropped
from Happenstance and never expected to see again.
On impulse he began to read them,
and with each word, each phrase, he felt his emotions rushing to the surface,
coming at him all at once. The dreams, his memories, his loss, the anguish. He
stopped. His mouth went dry as he pressed his lips together. Instead of reading
any more, he simply stared at them in shock. He barely heard the front door
open and then close. Theresa called out,
“Garrett, I’m back.” She paused,
and he could hear her walking through the apartment. Then,
“Where are you?”
He didn’t answer. He couldn’t do
anything but try to grasp how this had happened. How could she have them? They
were his letters . . . his personal letters. The letters to his wife. Letters
that were no one else’s business. Theresa stepped into the room and looked at
him. Though he didn’t know it, his face was pale,
his knuckles white as they gripped
the pages he held.
“Are you okay?” she asked, not
realizing what was in his hands.
For a moment, it was as if he
hadn’t heard her. Then, looking up slowly, he glared at her. Startled, she
almost spoke again. But she didn’t. Like a wave, everything hit her at the same
time —the open drawer, the papers in his hand, the expression on his face—and
she knew immediately what had happened.
“Garrett . . . I can explain,” she
said quickly, quietly. He didn’t seem to hear her.
“My letters . . . ,” he whispered.
He looked at her, a mixture of confusion and rage.
“I . . .”
“How did you get my letters?” he
demanded, the sound of his voice making her flinch.
“I found one washed up at the beach
and—”
He cut her off. “You found it?”
She nodded, trying to explain.
“When I was at the Cape. I was jogging and I came across the bottle. . . .”
He glanced at the first page, the
only original letter. It was the one he had written earlier that year.
But the others . . .
“What about these?” he asked,
holding up the copies. “Where did they come from?”
Theresa answered softly. “They were
sent to me.”
“By whom?” Confused, he rose from
the bed.
She took a step toward him, holding
out her hand. “By other people who’d found them. One of the people read my
column. . . .”
“You published my letter?” He
sounded as if he’d just been hit in the stomach.
She didn’t answer for a moment. “I
didn’t know . . . ,” she began.
“You didn’t know what?” he said
loudly, the hurt evident in his tone. “That it was wrong to do that? That this
wasn’t something that I wanted the world to see?”
“It was washed up on the beach—you
had to know someone would find it,” she said quickly. “I didn’t use your
names.”
“But you put it in the paper. . . .” He
trailed off in disbelief.
“Garrett . . . I—”
“Don’t,” he said angrily. Again he
glanced at the letters, then looked back at her, as if he were seeing her for
the first time. “You lied to me,” he said, almost as if it were a revelation.
“I didn’t lie. . . .”
He wasn’t listening. “You lied to
me,” he repeated, as if to himself. “And you came to find me. Why? So you could
write another column. Is that what this is about?”
“No . . . it isn’t like that at
all. . . .”
“Then what was it?”
“After reading your letters, I . .
. I wanted to meet you.”
He didn’t understand what she was
saying. He kept looking from the letters to her and back again. His expression
was pained.
“You lied to me,” he said for the
third time. “You used me.”
“I didn’t. . . .”
“Yes, you did!” he shouted, his
voice echoing in the room. Remembering Catherine, he held the letters out in
front of him, as if Theresa had never seen them before. “These were mine—my feelings,
my thoughts, my way of dealing with the loss of my wife. Mine—not yours.”
“I didn’t mean to hurt you.”
He stared hard at her without
saying anything. His jaw muscles tensed.
“This whole thing is a sham, isn’t
it,” he said finally, not waiting for her to answer. “You took my feelings for
Catherine and tried to manipulate them into something you wanted. You thought
that because I loved Catherine, I would love you, too, didn’t you?” Despite
herself, she paled. She felt suddenly incapable of speech.
“You planned all this from the
beginning, didn’t you?” He paused again, running his free hand through his
hair. When he spoke, his voice began to crack. “The whole thing was set up—”
He seemed dazed for a moment, and
she reached out to him.
“Garrett—yes, I admit I wanted to
meet you. The letters were so beautiful—I wanted to see what kind of person
writes like that. But I didn’t know where it would lead, I didn’t plan on
anything after that.” She took his hand. “I love you, Garrett. You’ve got to
believe me.”
When she finished speaking, he
pulled his hand free and moved away.
“What kind of person are you?”
The comment stung, and she
responded defensively, “It’s not what you think. . . .”
Garrett pressed on, oblivious of
her response. “You got caught up in some weird fantasy. . . .”
That was too much. “Stop it,
Garrett!” she cried angrily, hurt by his words. “You didn’t listen to anything
I said!” As she shouted, she felt tears welling up in her eyes.
“Why should I listen? You’ve been
lying to me ever since I’ve known you.”
“I didn’t lie! I just never told
you about the letters!”
“Because you knew it was wrong!”
“No—because I knew you wouldn’t
understand,” she said, trying to regain her composure.
“I understand all right. I
understand what kind of person you are!”
Her eyes narrowed. “Don’t be like
this.”
“Be like what? Mad? Hurt? I just
found out this whole thing was a charade, and now you want me to stop?”
“Shut up!” she shouted back, her
anger suddenly rising to the surface.
He seemed stunned by her words, and
he stared at her without speaking. Finally, with breaking voice, he held out
the letters again.
“You think you understand what
Catherine and I had together, but you don’t. No matter how many letters you
read—no matter how well you know me—you’ll never understand. What she and I had
was real. It was real, and she was real. . . . ”
He paused, collecting his thoughts,
regarding her as if she were a stranger. Then, stiffening, he said something
that hurt her worse than anything he’d said so far.
“We’ve never even come close to
what Catherine and I had.”
He didn’t wait for a response.
Instead he walked past her, toward his suitcase. After throwing
everything inside, he zipped it
quickly. For a moment she thought to stop him, but his comment had left her
reeling. He stood, lifting his bag. “These,” he said, holding the letters, “are
mine, and I’m taking them with me.”
Suddenly realizing what he intended
to do, she asked, “Why are you leaving?”
He stared at her. “I don’t even
know who you are.”
Without another word, he turned
around and strode through the living room and out the door
p.g 150-153. Message in a bottle. Nicholas Sparks
Reference:
William
Eller, Ruth E. Reeves & Edward J. Gordon. 1964. The study of literature.
Gin and company.